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Dream's Child

Crescent moon in sky my dreams fly on silver wings past blue horizon a nest waiting among trees lush,evergreen rainforest. Distant island's call beyond moonlight sonata baby bird's first flight its growing wings soon cover me,my sleep and new born dreams. © 2011 kash poet ============================

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/21/2012 8:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in ~P.D.'s~ "The Dreams" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/20/2012 6:31:00 PM

Kash, I think you just made my fav's list with this one. Outstanding work, as usual. Well done, my friend, well done. Congrats on making PD's winners' list....................S.Ronthorpe

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2012 5:38:00 PM

congrats, Kash. it's better than an HM for me!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/20/2012 9:13:00 AM

congrats Kash on an HM for this dreamy delight luv..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/20/2012 4:17:00 AM

Congratulations Kash, a well deserved win xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/19/2012 8:05:00 PM

KASH.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your wonderful dreamy poem... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/6/2011 2:00:00 PM

Congrat's on this Dream's Child success in the contest, Kash. It is a magical write that showcases your imagination so well. ....Looked for an updated Avatar for ya but a large amount of my pic files are mysteriously missing...the Pen-Gwens will have to continue dancing for the mean time. ;) Gwendolen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/6/2011 11:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/6/2011 10:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "1-14 Line" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2011 6:03:00 PM

Hey,. this looks like a double duty poem with a double duty win?? I remember it. It must have won in Tracie's contset too, right? Congratulations!!!

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/4/2011 2:52:00 PM

Congratulations on a very fine win, Kash. Lovely imagery I enjoyed! Annalise

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 12/4/2011 12:25:00 PM

Lovely! Congratulations on your well deserved win! Lori

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/4/2011 8:18:00 AM

Well written Kash. Congratulations

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/4/2011 7:43:00 AM

every day & night a new chance ..every child a new hope..so true, Congrad's Light & Love

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 12/3/2011 11:17:00 PM

Nice write,Kash.Congrats on your well deserved win...

Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Date: 12/3/2011 9:56:00 PM

Congrats on your win...Anoucheka

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2011 10:11:00 PM

Kash... i love the thought of a new born theme always..... enjoyed stopping by tooo read your poem~;-) always,..p.d.

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 12/1/2011 9:19:00 PM

Wow Kash.. you painted a beautiful picture with these words... really lovely... a pleasure to read...smiles... Chiquita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2011 10:05:00 PM

Kash, glad you liked my modern haiku. I am never sure on those things!!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/30/2011 2:47:00 PM

Oh so dreamy....you have put this reader in a trance...now awaiting her sleep....zzzzzzzzzzzzz.......looking for my comfy nest under the baby bird's wings. Ahhhhhh. So well-written, Kash. I love it. You could even flip the title to read--Child's Dreams. :) Awesome write, Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/29/2011 2:55:00 PM

What a wonderful dream this child has, Kash -- flying to new lands and finding lush rainforests and birds' nests. I'd like to land there myself when I shut my eyes at night. Beautiful! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/28/2011 11:01:00 PM

oh, soup mail again!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/28/2011 10:44:00 PM

whoo, you are getting real great with short forms, my kashi.. love this lyrical piece! :) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2011 9:37:00 PM

this is marvelous, Kash. And it "feels" dreamy too. I love that "beyond moonlight sonata" soupmail.

M.I.A .

Date: 11/28/2011 8:26:00 PM

lovely... simply lovely..