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Dreams

Dreams are wishes you make, And an idea that your brain bakes. Little do you know, you can make it come true, If the right stuff, you are willing to do. If you want to be an athlete, your sport you must practice, Or if you want to make a change, your measures might need to be drastic. Maybe you want to be a famous chef, Or maybe you want to have a boy named Jeff. Whatever your dream is, make it come true And then dream of bigger things that you want to do!

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Date: 6/10/2016 8:00:00 AM
A wonderful way of describing everyone's dreams in a single, short verse!! Congrats Harlow, for having your work featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!! ;-)
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Date: 4/29/2016 11:47:00 AM
Hope to see a new one from you soon, ---SKAT
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Date: 4/26/2016 12:32:00 AM
Hi Anonymous, Nice & amazing first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs
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Date: 4/25/2016 10:33:00 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Anonymous. :)
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Date: 4/25/2016 7:48:00 PM
Anonymous, well said, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Harlow Yappen
Date: 4/26/2016 4:22:00 PM
Thank you!! It is one of my first poems and I'm only a decade old.
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Harlow Yappen
Date: 4/26/2016 3:41:00 PM
Thank you!! It is one of my first poems and I'm only a decade old.
Date: 4/25/2016 6:21:00 PM
Nice rhyme AP
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Date: 4/25/2016 6:15:00 PM
Interesting poem, Anonymous Person,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Harlow Yappen
Date: 4/25/2016 6:29:00 PM
Thank you Linda! I just started poetry so I need some constructive criticism and help!!

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