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Dreams

when you dream like a child and you dream as a girl when moments do arrive you've been dreaming all along your friends area all around you you think they'll help you when you're down but friendships just betrayal cause you've been dreaming all along saying days are just new getting old but you never knew and when moment comes for death you feel you've been dreaming all along when you love a girl so much and she turns and smiles one day you say i wish i hadn't been dreaming all along

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Date: 11/11/2014 7:14:00 AM
tangible expression and comprehension of what is happening today with feelings like love, friendship....enjoyed greatly!
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Date: 11/2/2014 6:01:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Anbes- I choose your first well written poem - I like it a lot !! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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