Dreams

DREAMS star-dazed angel dust sifting through the night sandman meanderings in drifting snowflake patterns "sky-dive through one's own subconscious" __________________________________ For Nette's Contest: "Create Your Pyramid" 6/3/14 by Carrie Richards

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/16/2014 3:04:00 PM

Your style here has a quality of lyricism--so dreamy, carrie.. belated congrats on your top slot in my challenge!.. huggs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/14/2014 7:55:00 AM

This is beautiful, congratulations.

Estela Canama

Date: 6/14/2014 6:29:00 AM

Simply amazing... Congrats!

Elaine George

Date: 6/14/2014 5:44:00 AM

You have created a very dreamlike quality with this dreamy verse Carry. many conrat's on your fist place win. ben Eaine

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/13/2014 1:11:00 PM

How creative, Carrie! Congratulations on your big win, dear. Love, Carolyn

Len Gasun

Date: 6/13/2014 9:13:00 AM

Awesome poem my dear friend Carrie. My hearty congratulations as well on your well-deserved first win! Thanks a lot for stopping on mine.Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Frederic Parker

Date: 6/12/2014 2:41:00 PM

sky dive through one's own subconscious, great line..congratulations on a strong win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2014 11:57:00 PM

DREAMY!!! and thinking outside the box. Congrats!!

Skat A

Date: 6/11/2014 11:08:00 PM

Carrie, :) CONGRATS in Nette's CREATE YOUR PYRAMID contest! Luv ~SKAT~

Tim Ryerson

Date: 6/11/2014 8:10:00 PM

As Ronnie Reagan famously said to Jimmy Carter: Theerre you go AGAIN! Another 1st place winner...Fabulous write my friend - Tim

Tim Ryerson
Date: 6/11/2014 8:17:00 PM

PS: Gonna send you a classical music playlist via Spotify as soon as get my new PC working right. It includes music from The Lord of the Rings, Braveheart and The Last of the Mohicans...