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Dreams

Lie in a bath of foaming suds to dream Thinking that I am in your arms again Can feel your heart beating next to mine Sinewy legs, round my body entwined Hot kisses up and down my spine Whispers of undying love divine Such dreams so sensual refresh you as true But I wake up and find I’m not with you. Dreams so deep do release your pain Only to feel them begin to ache again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/3/2012 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Michael's "Deep Dreams" contest Seren. I am sorry this is late. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/23/2012 11:36:00 PM
This is a very beautiful couplet which I enjoyed reading Seren! Congratulations on your awesome win! love and hugs, Leonora
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/24/2012 3:49:00 AM
Thank you for the congrats, glad you enjoyed it ...Seren
Date: 11/23/2012 7:00:00 PM
congrats on your win. many can connect to your words.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/24/2012 3:48:00 AM
thats a nice thing to say Nicole. many thanks ....Seren
Date: 11/23/2012 6:07:00 PM
Passionate winning work..Congrats ..Sara
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/23/2012 6:37:00 PM
Thank you Sara ..............Seren
Date: 11/23/2012 5:57:00 PM
Seren, congratulations!;-) With your "deep dream" win in Michael's awesome contest. Good night~PD
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/23/2012 6:36:00 PM
Thank you P.D....
Date: 11/23/2012 7:00:00 AM
The worst kind of dream - waking up to realize it never actually happened. Very well done! Congrats :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/23/2012 1:25:00 PM
Thats true Heather, thanks for stopping by .....Seren
Date: 11/23/2012 6:10:00 AM
Congrad's on Your Win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/23/2012 5:48:00 AM
Congrats Seren on you win in my Deep dream contest... hugs Michael
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Date: 11/18/2012 3:08:00 PM
wow Seren, this is lovely, you really bring the reader into the poem, again awesome poem... soul mail
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/18/2012 5:13:00 PM
Thanks Harry, mail answered lol ...Seren
Date: 11/18/2012 10:25:00 AM
Seren nicely penned, distant visions and dreams...David
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/18/2012 11:39:00 AM
Thank you David......Seren p.s. Tenby is a nice area to live.
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David Williams
Date: 11/18/2012 10:48:00 AM
have a sister near Tenby...

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