Dreams

Dreams breaking With the dawn Delicate bubbles Filled with smoke Of the past And wisps of The future Oh how I wish I could dwell there

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/28/2020 9:01:00 PM

Glad to see your muse is back ~ expressing what many of us are also feeling in these surreal times. Well done, Timothy.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/28/2020 9:35:00 PM

thank you so much friend

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/23/2020 12:04:00 PM

You will Timothy, we all will and how much we will appreciate it and how thankful to God we will be - but, we will always remember the soldiers that fought this vicious unseen enemy bravely, to stay alive. Your dream sounds like a dream come true! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/28/2020 9:36:00 PM

thank you Jennifer

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/19/2020 4:30:00 AM

Sound's like a nice place to be, welcome back Timothy, hope you're well. Tom

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/19/2020 4:05:00 PM

thanks friend, just returned to work after 5 weeks off