Dreams (Modern Cinquain)

Dreams Sleeping movie Playing my mind peace, hope, joy, love Escape

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Constantinos Grigoriadis

Date: 10/13/2008 6:52:00 AM

Small but powerful poem. Nicely done. Thank you.

Deborah Herber

Date: 10/8/2008 5:54:00 PM

It's amazing how your simple words can come alive and make me feel so much! You are my favorite poet, my inspiration, and my hope! Thank you for your gift of words! God Bless You....Deb

Sara Zahed

Date: 10/3/2008 6:46:00 AM

Indeed....a "Sleeping movie"...You gave me the image of how long time ago the movies were played and recorded....well-written...Sara...

Deneen White

Date: 9/30/2008 3:48:00 PM

I loev to dream especially when it's a good one, this brings good thoughts, take care D-nyce

Michaela Payne

Date: 9/29/2008 8:36:00 AM

I love dreams, that's my favorite part of sleeping, loved this cinquain :) ~Michaela~

George Anos

Date: 9/28/2008 9:47:00 PM

yes! but just after you wake up it seems you are still out of touch with reality for the first few minutes hehe! If it is a really nice dream you felt not waking up at all..

James Foulk

Date: 9/28/2008 8:26:00 PM

you know i have dreams that seem to go on all night, I get up and go to the bath room and go back to sleep and the dream continues and i don't want to wake up again with the fear that the dream will end, but it is like a movie. so i can relate to this poem, really enjoyed this one you wrote.

Michael Torres

Date: 9/28/2008 7:51:00 AM

Michael- Follow those dreams. Another perfect escalation of words with a proceeding affect each bringing about a different result to the mind and soul, with each responsive feeling. You take something very difficult to find thesuccesive feeling and you put into words and make it look easy. One word for that is "TALENT".......God has truly blessed you. Michael and Janice

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/28/2008 6:35:00 AM

Of course these make you just want to go right back to sleep and keep on dreaming. You are on a roll today! Well done. Love, Shar

Ameliya Conners

Date: 9/28/2008 6:25:00 AM

You're so true dear. Dreams are peace, hope, joy, love and ESCAPE. Loved reading it. It was great. Love and regards, Ameliya