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Dreamland

When my child hastens to her pillow, To close her eyes and dream; She drifts away with stars to play, Where magic paints the scene. Mermaids with their tresses wild, Dance beneath the sea; And dolphins sing their vesper hymn, Among the coral tree. Faeries dance in filmy gowns, In woodlands dark and deep; With stars to trim their silver crowns, While blossoms rest in sleep. She dreamt of a pixie painter, And watched as the vision grew; A violet smiled beside him, As he dipt his brush in dew. He painted all to please the mind, The shades of earth and sky; The buds of all the roses, And a light in the bluebird's eye. At last the dawn is breaking, Rosy sunrise paints the skies; My darling is awakening, As she rubs her sleepy eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/14/2011 4:40:00 PM
Enchanting! And I too would like to see you make this into a children's book. Ethereal. A bit like Alice in wonderland. Enjoyed.
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Date: 8/12/2011 10:40:00 AM
wonderful work....TAH
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Date: 8/11/2011 9:49:00 PM
An enchanting write Elizabeth. My favorite of your work that I've read to this point. Great imagination here.
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Date: 8/11/2011 7:35:00 PM
Oh WoW! This needs to be published in a children's book. From 1 to 7 this rates a 10 Superb in every way. Going into my faves. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/11/2011 1:53:00 PM
Enchanting images, my friend. Beautiful
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Date: 8/10/2011 12:47:00 PM
I just adored this one, Elizabeth! Gosh, I am such a sucker for dreamy poems and this one is definitely one of those, you got me all smiling here! I could just picture everything that you wrote here and if only I knew how to paint this, this would look so great in a book of poems for kids-- you mentioned you were happy you read me, thank you, I am also so happy to be reading your poems :D you sure write gems!
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Date: 8/9/2011 11:48:00 PM
Your sweet 'Dream' is very very sweet. Enjoyed it. Beautifully penned. I love it. bl
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Date: 8/9/2011 1:40:00 PM
such a sweet and tender piece of lovely poetry. thank you for commenting on A Fallen Baby Skunk. yes i hate that smell they make, though babies don't have that pouch yet, but i love all wild life even skunks.
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Date: 8/9/2011 7:11:00 AM
you have some imagination Elizabeth, another classic, i love this, takes me back to when my gran used to read to me. if only the real world could be like this. a beautifu write. steven
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Date: 8/9/2011 2:21:00 AM
This is adorable, Elizabeth! You just have the one daughter? My two granddaughters just adore princess stuff.
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Date: 8/8/2011 11:49:00 PM
very well written. Nice flow. Its a good poem to read at bedtime. I could see this being in a book sold in a bookstore. You get better and better.
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Date: 8/8/2011 11:48:00 PM
I love the stories of mermaids, I thought I might catch one while fishing this last weekend, but no such luck...a wonderful write about an age old subject, thank you...and congratulations on your premium membership
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Date: 8/8/2011 9:00:00 PM
Beautiful, magnificent poem. It evokes a fantasy world for children.
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Date: 8/8/2011 8:58:00 PM
Beautiful, magnificent poem. It evokes a fantasy world for children.
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Date: 8/8/2011 8:31:00 PM
WOW!! This is such a creative write! I love the rhyming you did and the imagery is fabulous! Great poem!!
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Date: 8/8/2011 8:29:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “Love It My Dear, Blessed & Beautiful Elizabeth! = Tis That Sweeet, Innocent, Colourful, Loving, Perfect Picture Painted Through Eyes of A Precious Childs Feel Unto This Enchanting Beauty Marked to Be Flown Unto That Special Place In My Humble & Grateful Faves == Completely Beautiful &, What We All Need More of, `Love Sweeet Love!`” === My Love Unto Your Priceless Heart, Always & Forever, Jasper *
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Date: 8/8/2011 8:13:00 PM
I am not the type to say this, really, but awwww how cute :). Very well written and fantastic journey through the dream world Mrs. Elizabeth, congrats on becoming a Premium Member as well!
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