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Dreaming of the Sea

Walking at the edge of the waves Feeling the peace my heart craves Feeling a kinship with the deep sea And the calm it always brings me... There is music in the sounds it brings And the mysteries of which it sings The smells that one can only find here I'm drifting when the first lights appear... Then out the window the landscape bleak Not the vista that I thought I would seek Surely there is beauty here to be found But to my dream I am tightly bound....
Barbara Gorelick 9/19/12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/6/2013 2:59:00 PM
I too am drawn to the ocean. If you have a chance read my Poem Your Ocean. I am very much enjoying reading your poems today.
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Date: 9/22/2012 6:26:00 PM
A lovely seaside dream.
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Date: 9/21/2012 5:21:00 PM
nicely penned...soup mail...
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Date: 9/21/2012 8:10:00 AM
Very good dream poem here Barbara.Enjoyed the read.Best wishes to you.
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Date: 9/21/2012 6:04:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your outstanding writing with us Barbara. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/21/2012 1:41:00 AM
What a fun poem. I especially like your first stanza. Well done.
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Date: 9/21/2012 1:30:00 AM
It sure must be heavenly to dream this dream. I love the sea as well and many a happy day have I spent there. Loved it.
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Date: 9/20/2012 11:51:00 PM
I could just picture myself on the Atlantic City boardwalk as I read this nice descriptive piece.
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