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Dreaming Faraway Drifting

The mountain is covered in a dense falling fog gun barrel grey clouds shading out, unto silver changing outwards orange to soft peach Gracing the sun setting sky warm thoughts Runaway dream hums, within birds singing gently almost a magic spell sings, in one background choir Enchanting the breeze on a cold tune blue blowing wind on a November Evening has broken soft brushing across the brow a dream beauty touching, deep feelings holding hands Silver treasure lining clouds, I want to bathe inside your crowning desires Oh you're the angel who takes me out, from darkness dazzling me in light of your sun, shining smiles bright Crying around the valley howling, a wolf sad sweet humming tunes, gentle soft, whispers to a dream I wrote this 12/12/9/9 ending last on the 12 note

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Date: 11/26/2014 5:06:00 PM
love the scenery you displayed first stanza and the change of mood on the succeeding stanza,,, you surely can glue a reader.. :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/28/2014 11:21:00 AM
smiling olive just drawing around what i saw wonderful comment dear friend bless you
Date: 11/25/2014 7:41:00 PM
Awesome write old pal!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/28/2014 10:28:00 AM
ken dear pal thank you for the amazing comment heartfelt appreciated bless you
Date: 11/25/2014 7:07:00 PM
Very nice imagery & nice to see the different syllable count. Light & Love
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/27/2014 11:57:00 AM
thank you so much debbie wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you
Date: 11/25/2014 6:06:00 PM
This poem is like the scenes it depicts so beautifully....ever changing as I re-read it. Well done Liam, a tantalizing dream sequence.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/27/2014 9:42:00 AM
thank you john smiling truly beautiful comment bless you
Date: 11/25/2014 5:40:00 PM
My dearest friend Liam this is so very magnificent and so very beautiful. I really enjoyed it! A 7 +++from me! God bless you! :) Love and hugs! ^0^ xxxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/27/2014 9:31:00 AM
thank you dorian truly wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated bless you

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