Dreaming

I dreamed I was within your dream You awoke and I did not, so it would seem

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Date: 4/27/2016 11:14:00 PM

David, Congrats on your fine couplet win. LINDA

Date: 4/15/2016 9:14:00 AM

David, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest...:)-luloo

Date: 4/27/2014 2:38:00 PM

sensitive portrayal of being one with another from the soul level.. dream on; splendid job,david.. huggs

David Mohn
Date: 4/27/2014 4:40:00 PM

Thank you so much Nette for the thoughtful comments :)

Date: 4/26/2014 3:28:00 PM

Oh! lovely couplet! Wonder what became of your dream!! cu // paul

David Mohn
Date: 4/26/2014 4:58:00 PM

Thanks Paul, not as "well rounded" as yours, but an effort none the less :)

Date: 4/25/2014 2:30:00 AM

Hey, I like this...clever write, Dave. Peace :-)

David Mohn
Date: 4/25/2014 10:36:00 AM

Thank you Mel...very much appreciated