Dreaming

I sat up in my bed From the dream in my head Thought I saw a unicorn prancing by As I watched hummingbirds flutter nearby I felt the ladybugs land on my head It was a happy day for sure, as I found laughter in my head. That mean old mama,,,, she treats you like an old shoe,,,, I treat you like a rose in my heart! 11am 3/2/ 2013 I wrote the dreaming one this morning, my six yr old g-daughter stated the other one to me last night, Londyn thought her mom, my daughter was coming home after work, though she went to office B-Day party, that's why Londyn said that,,,, so I'm giving her credit.

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Don Johnson

Date: 3/12/2013 2:13:00 AM

just a bit of rhyme and flow, well done here toe by toe :) well done ....

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/7/2013 3:30:00 PM

wonderful and inspiring Debbie

Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/10/2013 5:31:00 PM

Thank you harry ;}

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 3/7/2013 10:59:00 AM

So sweet and endearing! A hug for you and your darling granddaughter for this magical poem. Keith

Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/10/2013 5:30:00 PM

Thank you ;}

Susan Palli

Date: 3/5/2013 12:45:00 AM

Nice one!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2013 11:32:00 PM

oh yes, what you said about your haiku. Please don't be afraid to post modern haiku. 5/7/5 is actually less acceptable these days. I for one almost prefer to see the other kind!!

Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/5/2013 12:39:00 AM

I will ;}

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2013 11:31:00 PM

this is adorable and including your daughter that way!! hmmm, I was gonna tell you something. Let me go back to the comment you made to me. Maybe it had something to do with that. If not, I guess I forgot what I meant to tell you!!

Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/5/2013 12:38:00 AM

Thanks for reading ;}

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 3/4/2013 9:06:00 AM

impressive write sweet Debbie..like it so much :) <3 Sk

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/4/2013 5:51:00 AM

Excellent write with lovely words. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/4/2013 7:15:00 PM

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2013 4:25:00 AM

Interesting dream...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/4/2013 7:13:00 PM

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Anthony Nutter

Date: 3/3/2013 6:19:00 PM

A wonderful write, loved it

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/3/2013 12:15:00 PM

Small and large poets .... makes a very good job! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/3/2013 5:44:00 PM

Thank you Anne ;}

David Williams

Date: 3/3/2013 4:51:00 AM

Debbie excellent words from both of you...David

Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/3/2013 5:44:00 PM

Thank you David ;}

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/2/2013 6:59:00 PM

You have a very kind heart which is the genesis of "dreaming". Have many happy days in this wonderful world since you are blessed with a beautiful grand daughter.

Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/2/2013 7:15:00 PM

Thank you Duke ;}

Donna Jones

Date: 3/2/2013 4:46:00 PM

Sounds like there are two poets in the family...very sweet :-) :-)

Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/2/2013 5:19:00 PM

Thank you Donna ;}