Dreaming

dreaming of springtime trees coming into new life.... the earth’s renewal dreaming of summer shadows languid and lazy.... leftover sunshine dreaming of autumn gold stretching across branches.... covering the ground dreaming of winter frozen fields of waiting life.... iced-in patience

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2011 4:37:00 PM

A special set. I particularly love summer, both as a season and for your haiku. But wow, autumn and winter also amazing!

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/21/2011 5:06:00 AM

Love all of these, wow.

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/11/2011 2:27:00 AM

Beautiful work Deb, each one is wonderful.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/10/2011 6:22:00 PM

Wonderful Deb ..but his "Sweetheart" only dreams of Summer 365 days a year... haha.. especially with this gianormous snowstorm expected to hit us tomorrow... where is the beach???

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/10/2011 6:15:00 PM

A set of seasonal haiku does not get any better than this. Great presentation

Constance La France

Date: 1/10/2011 4:48:00 PM

I am dreaming of spring, and summer and fall but I am living the winter, lovely poem, deb ~~ soup mail in a moment~~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/10/2011 1:05:00 PM

Dreaming of sorts of life round the year, deb

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/10/2011 11:30:00 AM

A stunning series of haiku and the changes in season Deb.. We are currently in the summer phase over here ;)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/10/2011 9:37:00 AM

Beautifully written verse on the change of seasons, Deb. It seems no matter which season we're in, we're always looking ahead to the next one. Love, Carolyn