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Dreamers Dance

Her thoughts drift out the window on the cool autumn breeze and a smile creeps upon her withered face as she remembers the first time she saw this house This house that is so old and worn like her heart and she sways to the music in her mind as a tune tumbles from her memory she dances and twirls across the floor as the melody carries her dream back to the days when he was still alive and would sweep her into his arms and kiss her wrinkled brow she stops in mid-stride and a tear rolls down her leathery cheek and she smiles a smile for the love they shared when they were caught up in their dreamers dance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/13/2009 8:21:00 PM
Lovely poem Trudy. I can feel this one intimately. Love my old house. ~M~
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Date: 7/9/2009 3:32:00 PM
Ha, ha, no, Trudy, this one I'd forgotten all about. The one I'm talking about is something like 'An Old House Called Home by Someone. Thanks so much for reading my stuff. Love, daver
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Date: 7/9/2009 8:52:00 AM
There is something about old houses, particularly an old house one has lived in. God, what nostalgia! I wrote a poem about an old house. It's a way down the list somewhere. anywho, good, good write. daver
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Date: 7/7/2009 2:18:00 PM
Lovely lovley poem Trudy, your pen is flowing beautifully>>James
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Date: 7/7/2009 10:53:00 AM
beautiful write Trudy-charma
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Date: 7/7/2009 5:11:00 AM
Trudy, this is too beautiful for words. What an amazing write you have here. I shed a tear for them. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2009 7:15:00 PM
oh the soup is alive with soul tonight! Trudy! great write!! jim
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