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Dreamer

I close my eyes, then I drift away Into the magic night I softly say. A silent hope like dreamers do Then I fall asleep to dreams of you I open my eyes to a morning ray And into the light I softly say; Beauty is light in sparkled view, And all I see is forever you

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Date: 6/18/2013 10:10:00 AM
Good afternoon Benjamin, wow, I open my eyes to a morning ray, ----softly say. a very beautiful line. I wish to be like the dreamer in this poem. and find that forever feeling when it comes to love. nice imagery. *luv ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 6/18/2013 4:03:00 AM
This is lovely Benjamin and it flows so well xx
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Date: 5/9/2013 10:00:00 AM
wow that is great keep this up coz i want to hear more! u r great!
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