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In someone else’s dream I long to be. I yearn to permeate his heart and mind. So when he drifts to sleep it’s me he’ll see, and in my arms his paradise he’ll find. We’ll meet inside a world of glowing hues and catch a star to Venus and the moon. As homeward bound on comet’s tail we cruise, I’ll read his wicked thoughts and nearly swoon. Then slowly I’ll fulfill his fantasies. He’ll sweetly moan, and then my name he’ll call. Inside this dream I’ll have him on his knees, for I will be his only and his all. But no, not he. . . it’s I who can’t resist! And it’s in dreams of mine(not his) we’ve kissed.
For the Dream a lil Dream Contest of Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/10/2020 9:05:00 PM
This is dreamy, no pun intended! To daydream about being in that special one's dreams is a longing worthy of sonnetry, and you have done it well, as is your wont. Nice twist ending, too.
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Date: 5/6/2013 6:59:00 AM
ahhh....such a beautiful poem....enjoyed again.
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Date: 8/7/2012 11:41:00 PM
Reading some of my Fav poems today....did u know I faved this one?
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Date: 1/12/2012 2:22:00 PM
seaching for more sonnets, not disappointed. harry
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Date: 12/26/2011 10:33:00 AM
I like the twist in this and how well you express the feelings one has for the other great work !
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Date: 12/25/2011 4:32:00 PM
This poem is so beautiful and artfully penned! I loved every word - absolutely no flaws to find!! Always, Laura
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Date: 12/9/2011 7:50:00 AM
Congrats on your win in th Dream a little dream contest!!!! Your work always makes me smile... XOXOXO all for you... luv Michael
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Date: 12/9/2011 5:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win in Tracie's "Dream" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/9/2011 12:37:00 AM
Congrats on your 8th place win in my contest Adrea luv..you beautiful dreamer you xx
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Date: 12/8/2011 10:36:00 PM
A beautiful dream well portrayed Andrea. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/7/2011 8:15:00 PM
oow, so lovely! it's a winner for me, good luck on the contest
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Date: 12/7/2011 4:15:00 PM
Yes, you do know how to race my heart beat. So romantic. I wish your fantasies and reality come together.
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Date: 12/7/2011 1:22:00 PM
Simply delightful and dreamy to read Andrea, I love it :)
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Date: 12/6/2011 11:43:00 PM
lol... Andrea, nice,..,, .ENJOYED.. and good luck in the contest~ thank you for sharing your wonderful poem;-) Have yourself a very lovely day, always,..p.d.
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Date: 12/6/2011 11:58:00 AM
Unspoken passion seems to be the daily ration. As moonbeams pass in the night. It's sad when two people miss the mark and slowly drift from sight. I'm not so sure the day will come when lovers find their way. These empty dreams and moonlit beams just leave us in dismay.
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Date: 12/6/2011 11:39:00 AM
Permeate is definitely on my top ten Favorite Words LIST! I have been away from the SOUP for a while! We are finally all settled in down in Orlando! Moving is HELL! I digg this piece Andrea! HeY! today is my Birthday! 35!
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Date: 12/6/2011 10:33:00 AM
Fantastic write. Your dream is so sweet that positive politics is entailed. Nice dream of kiss. Thanks for your comment on my write. bl
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Date: 12/6/2011 9:57:00 AM
Is it Clooney? Someone said he is a dream maker. I'm sure that your waking moments can find the ideal, and he will fulfill the South Pacific tune - "Some enchanted evening...across a crowded room." Who does he see? Andrea, that's who. Love the twist you invented for the ending. Love, daver
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Date: 12/6/2011 7:44:00 AM
LOL, I love this fun piece, Andrea.
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Date: 12/6/2011 7:01:00 AM
Amazing turn in the last lines,Andrea.It is so nicely crafted.
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Date: 12/6/2011 4:16:00 AM
This is really a lovely dream Andrea. Very romantic.
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Date: 12/6/2011 2:47:00 AM
Love the way you ended this Andrea. Best of luck in the contest. Dream on. . .
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Date: 12/5/2011 11:55:00 PM
sounds like a great dream Andrea, fantasy is better than reality, first time in love words coming are, great words of originality...
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Date: 12/5/2011 10:11:00 PM
Hey girlfriend, Long time. I love this poem. But I think you're lying, you must have that someone special. WOw Love it. I'm playing catchup, reading all these excellent poems.
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Date: 12/5/2011 9:23:00 PM
deep dreamy write,,,so creative of you,,,and wow,,,it gets the readers attention............so sweet and sexy...
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