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Dream World

Yes, I saw ice flaming in the angry sun; smoke was oozing out of it! I felt heat in the north pole, while fishing! I swear it, I heard a seal telling me "good morning"! Can you believe I also tasted light from a candle flame?! Reality had exchanged places with fantasy for a moment....

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Date: 1/7/2014 1:40:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful commments on writes enjoyed the write above i like to fish but not to take the fish off the hook lol it's sound cold your scense. cheri
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/7/2014 11:53:00 PM
Welcome Cherl. Hehehe. That is some fishing :0
Date: 12/30/2013 2:39:00 AM
A great way to close the year--- still writing poems.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 12/30/2013 5:42:00 AM
Yes indeed, a poem to lighten up the air before the year closes. Have a blessed New Year!!!! :-)

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