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Dream Weaver

Moon dancer, in your petticoats, swirling on the lawn, dewdrop drinker, night wind stalker, daughter of the dawn. Castanets coil your fingers, diamonds drape your toes; not equal, but greater, if with normal juxtaposed. Beautifully different, a gypsy sort of soul, one, who out of nothing, music can cajole. Lightly stepping, ever reaching, walking upon air; if searching, one will find you climbing heaven's stair. Don't let the stale world change you; continue to pursue your dreamy fabrication--living impromptu. Copyright, September 28, 2014

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Date: 10/8/2014 1:33:00 AM
I just love your entry Faye! Congratulations on being in the winner's circle with this delightful poem!
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Date: 10/7/2014 8:06:00 PM
I can almost hear the click-clack sound of those taps and the castanets!! So great is this!! Congrats to you, Faye.....and thank you so much for all your kind encouragement!!
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Date: 10/7/2014 7:42:00 PM
your first 2couplets breathtakingly beautiful Faye.. :D!!!!!!!! wow!! congratulations.. :D
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Date: 10/7/2014 10:47:00 AM
Lively, wonderful couplets Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 10/7/2014 10:40:00 AM
Wonderful imagery n great rhyming is ur splendid write Faye! Big congrats on fine win!
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Date: 10/7/2014 12:51:00 AM
Beautifully penned with stunning imagery many congrats on your win. Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/6/2014 8:55:00 PM
Congrats on the win Faye.
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Date: 10/6/2014 8:18:00 PM
Sorry I missed this before but I'm glad I can read this jewel now and congratulate you on your win Faye.
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Date: 10/6/2014 7:43:00 PM
I'm back. CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN. You were another name I was happy to see on the list.
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Date: 9/29/2014 7:11:00 AM
We all need dreams. Fine write thank you for an enjoyable read.
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Date: 9/29/2014 4:59:00 AM
this is a very beautifully woven piece love the vision in this
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