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Dream Waiver

Held real in moments, I see your hand, Between the pillow and the bed; I feel your arm, Warm under my neck, Your breath soft on my back, But turning, I shift Awake Without you. And for a minute, I sit blindly on bed’s edge, Defining borders of reality ... Imagination ... Sleep’s sand-eyes gouged out To perceive wrinkled sheets, That were your fingers (Or my desires), In their proper light (And shadows).
-- James Ph. Kotsybar

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/20/2011 12:43:00 PM
Oops....for some reason this site displayed the poem with lines all run together (until I posted my initial comment)...Now, when I look at it again, the lines are indeed separated as I would have liked them to be. Good work! and sorry for the initial comment.
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Date: 4/20/2011 12:41:00 PM
A very nice poem...would probably have enjoyed it a little more had the lines been divided into logical bits at reasonable points instead of running on as prose sentences.... you fully imagined and conveyed your ideas...
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