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Dream Theme Andaree

Dream Theme Andaree Come listen how the thunder rolls with its might Like distant drums it echoes through the night Rain has pulsed a steady stream To ponder and dream Create a Theme For my dream Listening to the sound Like the rhythmn in a round I have captured my dream by daylight Come listen how the thunder rolls with its might Andareee Contest Andrea Dietrich (late entry) October 16, 2015

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/5/2017 8:00:00 AM

You should have been here yesterday afternoon. It was your poem in real life. Magnificent!

Ralph Sergi
Date: 9/5/2017 7:34:00 PM

Thank you, Patricia: I'm gearing up for Hurricane Irma here in Florida, if that's what you are talking about.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2015 7:57:00 PM

sorry this was too late for the contest, my friend. I think it would probably have made top ten!

Cherl Dunn

Date: 10/18/2015 11:58:00 AM

Dear Ralph This reminds me of the light rain just before the storm, than it clashes against the seas of the natural world lighting up the skys, sorry went inspirational on you love the poem, and good luck in the contest my friend and love the love, my adopted sister is Italian, and when they give someone a hug it takes a while to recomer afterwards, I'll tell you OMG, LOL CHERI

Ralph Sergi
Date: 10/18/2015 3:57:00 PM

Thank you very much, Cheri If its ok with you, I'm going to steal your line about recovering from an Italian hug. I like that.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 10/18/2015 8:04:00 AM

Thanks, Michael: Unfortunately, I was a late entry and was excluded. Stuff happens but I enjoyed attempting this form.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/17/2015 10:03:00 PM

Ralph this was Masterly done my friend. I think it would do very well in the contest.