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Dream Requiem

A dark unlit room Minimum realms of cold dreams Reaches my heart crate Timbers shook the proud fabric Existing within dream world
Russell Sivey Entrant into PD's "any poem about dreams.. (old or new)" contest 2/17/2012

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Date: 2/21/2012 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~P.D.'s~ "The Dreams" contest Russell. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2012 8:48:00 PM
congrats on your win..
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Date: 2/20/2012 4:23:00 PM
Russell, Using a Tanka was brilliant. I really enjoyed reading your poem. Congrats on making PD's winners' list....................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/20/2012 12:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the contest Russell.
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Date: 2/20/2012 3:53:00 AM
Congratulations Russell xx
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Date: 2/20/2012 12:57:00 AM
great winner place upon the tree, well done from ol johnson, me ... well done...
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Date: 2/19/2012 9:13:00 PM
congrats Russell on a great win for this dreamy delight so intense luv..
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Date: 2/19/2012 7:46:00 PM
Russell.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your wonderful dreamy poem... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
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Date: 2/17/2012 6:40:00 PM
This is a good tanka about your dream. When you reviewed my "Diamonds on Green Velvet", there was a typographical error. The last word was supposed to be "lawn" in lieu of "law". Reading your comment brought that to my attention.
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Date: 2/17/2012 6:10:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this eve..I bet the walls were breathing in and out with that dream sleep..Thanks for the kind review of my work about Willow Skeletal..Sara
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Date: 2/17/2012 3:25:00 PM
Well done Russell.Good luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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