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Dream Or Reality

Stuck in this cave inside my head. Used to be dark and ominous, now it's a safe place instead. Your voice is just a whisper now, as the blackness washes over me like a shower. Nails dig into my flesh as I hold myself close to me. Too much pain, have to keep it hidden so no one else can see. The torture, the tears, all the times my soul was ground into the earth, since the very day of my birth. I try to smile on the outside, It's not so easy. I try to believe that love and life is pleasing. But the fear of repeating life's mistakes is too heart wrenching. There is a light at the end of my tunnel. Beckoning me to come outside of myself. I inch my way, trust is not so easy. Closer now , I feel the warmth cover me. Could this be a dream, or is my soul finally free

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Date: 5/28/2016 12:48:00 PM
bonnie frascarelli, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 2/24/2012 5:22:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Bonnie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2012 9:34:00 PM
A good descriptive poem, but you have too many lines for this to be considered a "sonnet". A sonnet has fourteen lines that are usually in a 4-4-4-2 line structure. Also, two misspelled words need correction: eighth line, "sence" should be "since" eleventh line, "to" should be "too".
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