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Dream of Feudalism

Florid gold funds greed's frivolity Sedated mandate of sodden monotiny Forever renewing fields ripen with magnitude Fervent farmer forges quest of fortitude 26th July 2020 Contest : Four Lines of Poetry Sponsor: Constance La France

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/2/2020 8:13:00 PM

There is always that farmer! Congratulations on your win!

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/2/2020 11:30:00 PM

Don't tell anyone, these (slightly edited) words were discarded from an old poem.

Constance La France

Date: 7/29/2020 5:27:00 PM

Sigrid, congratulations on your win in my 4 line contest _Constance

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 7/30/2020 10:10:00 AM

Thank you, Constance! I see many gems among the list. Hard to judge, - at least fast to read,!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2020 1:44:00 PM

Nice alliteration. Congrats on the winner list.

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 7/29/2020 3:08:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. There are some light bulbs in this list. Really brilliant stuff, tough to have judged.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/28/2020 1:35:00 PM

Powerful thoughts with beautiful alliteration Sigrid. Congratulations on your win!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/28/2020 2:48:00 AM

- Four beautiful lines ... congratulations on your win, Sigrid :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)