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Dream Like State

In the morning I awake In the evening I vacate Vacate my body to a better place Where my inhibitions hastily dissipate Which allows my muse to embrace This holographic dream like state I stand in awe at the gate of my dreams What lies beyond these gates is yet to be seen Finished 2nd place 7/10/17 Contest Sponsor - Brian Strand. Standard Contest no 40.

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Date: 10/9/2017 6:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win :)
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Craig Hawkins
Date: 10/9/2017 9:10:00 AM
thank you very much x
Date: 10/8/2017 3:32:00 AM
Craig - sincere congratulations on your well-earned win, my friend, and blessings for more such recognition of your wonderful writing talents! Keep up the great work!
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Craig Hawkins
Date: 10/8/2017 6:01:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comments..
Date: 10/7/2017 5:09:00 PM
Craig, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win!
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Craig Hawkins
Date: 10/8/2017 6:02:00 AM
Thank you

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