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Dream Light

Hardened solid is the clay That shapes the way I am today I dream escape from endless grief Restoring child-like belief Experience has made me cold Stolen who I was before Left behind half of a whole Changed the essence of my core I wish to dance in brilliant light Cleanse my soul with gentle rain Slumber sound in dark of night At dawn awaken without pain Soar up high in skies above Gaze down upon meadows green To once again believe in love To have faith in things unseen Memories that formed the clay Although impossible to do Will them all to melt away And live the bliss that I once knew

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/23/2010 6:18:00 PM
love this. best wishes....
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Date: 1/5/2010 9:01:00 AM
Congratulations Judi, You have made it through the first round of judging for Poetrysoup October 13, 2009 poetry contest with your poem, "Dream Light" Life takes it's toll, but the peace is still available to those who seek. I enjoyed your poem. 2009 was a successful year of poetry for you. I come, now, wishing you continued success in your writing endeavors throughout 2010 and for many years to come. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 12/22/2009 10:24:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Judy. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:52:00 PM
Dear Judy, Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Lainie
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Date: 12/21/2009 8:20:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 2:42:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Judy! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 9:31:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 12/4/2009 8:40:00 PM
Never loose hope my dear. Beautifully written poem. Congrats on your poem being featured this week and thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:08:00 PM
Many congrats on your piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/1/2009 4:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Judy. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2009 1:31:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured Judy >> James
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Date: 11/30/2009 6:10:00 AM
Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 11/29/2009 4:39:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 11/29/2009 11:33:00 AM
I love this poetry, I found it posted by the soup,as a feature and fell in love with it because it flows like music. Hope you will post more and enjoy your day :)
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Date: 7/4/2009 12:26:00 PM
Awesome job! I like the flow of the words and the essence of the poem regarding Dream Light. Welcome to PoetrySoup! ~Joseph
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Date: 7/1/2009 10:43:00 PM
You still can=)Opening stanza was really well thought out-->Captured it perfectly
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Date: 7/1/2009 7:35:00 PM
Wow, that is just so powerful. You really touched a place in my life right now. So, beautiful it took my breath away. I look forward to reading more from you. I would appreciate it if you could check out my poem too. I am new as well....
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Date: 7/1/2009 3:02:00 PM
Beautiful poem Judy, and a warm welcome to the Soup>>James
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Date: 7/1/2009 12:23:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Judy. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/1/2009 9:25:00 AM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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