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'dream In Color'

I walked away with my mind and body in tact yet again my heart was bruised I didn't even realize how badly this time until I sat down and analyzed my thoughts my whole being felt torn will it ever get to its previous state of pretension? I guess the only one way to find out Is to unearth my treasure trove try and close my eyes see if I get to dream in color tonight if I get that right, I’ll start anew in the morning the hope and promise of seeing a new day Inspired by Linda Marie’s Treasure Trove Contest Written by: Wilma Neels
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Date: 3/15/2012 12:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Treasure Trove" contest Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/14/2012 8:12:00 PM
I really enjoyed the idea of trying to see if you get to dream in color that night. Very cool , Wilma. I don't know how I ever miss some of these poems people write, people whose poetry I try to see often! WEll, congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 3/14/2012 3:41:00 PM
Somehow so very sad. Congratulations on your win, Wilma. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/14/2012 9:45:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Wilma. Awesome. Nice going, my friend. luv and hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/14/2012 3:58:00 AM
Send you a congrats on your win. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/13/2012 8:44:00 PM
congrats Wilma on sweet success for this amazing entry luv.. thankxx for supporting too..
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Date: 3/11/2012 12:14:00 PM
To dream in colour is to allow ones hopes to flourish. I love the theme behind this poem Wilma. Good luck in the contest :) xx
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Date: 3/7/2012 10:50:00 AM
a wonderul entry for the contest. I really like "see if I get to dream in color tonight" awesome line!
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Date: 3/6/2012 7:54:00 PM
This poem is starting anew too in it's style , thought pattern and message. Wonderful, Wilma! .... Am doing well thank you and I hope you are hanging in there as well. love ya - Bob
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Date: 3/6/2012 9:22:00 AM
thankxxx for supporting my contest Wilma luv.. good luck.. your words are so hypnotic .. can hardly wait to read at judging to enjoy again ..
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Date: 3/5/2012 11:55:00 AM
a dash of glowing scenes from doubt to hope so well scribed and phrased, wilms.. i like how your treasure trove unraveled... winning huggs! :)
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Date: 3/5/2012 6:20:00 AM
Very sweet and beautiful..I do wish you the best dreams with million colours girl:) Charma
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Date: 3/4/2012 3:28:00 PM
This is exactly what our Linda wanted. Excellent on so many levels. We write from places no one else see's except me luv. A beauty as is the poet. Luv Michael
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Date: 3/4/2012 3:21:00 PM
Wilma, sometimes dreams help us escape the harshness of our world. I thought everyone dreamed in color until I read a book on dreams. You really have a knack for compartmentalizing feelings and moving forward with hope. God bless you, dear. Love, Carolyn
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