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Dream I: a Hypnopompic Realization

Snapped into a block. Feet planted in cool, grey cement at the deepest part of a cul-de-sac. Homes of others stretch on, their lights sadistically feeding the darkness. A silver horn firmly grasped, a music stand facing me. A book smothered with ink sits upon the stand. Time begins to slow... Pulses begins to haste... I interpret the music with the silver horn, stumbling at each line with difficulty. A potent storm begins to burst, atmospheric aquifers have cracked! Light, water! Wind! The ink begins to transfigure before my eyes, what was an eloquent phrase of 24 notes is now a clobber of 113. The Wind Bellows: "No moon nor sun to light the way, But clashing winds to fuel the fray! Expect to hear the things you fear, Expect to lose the things most near!" In the distance! The lights are dimming down the street...! And suddenly... They are off. Red screeching pain fills my heart... every light has gone black, darkness has eaten its last course. Blood begins to flood my eyes like an ocean drowning a dune. I fall. Snapped into a cool stasis.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/12/2013 11:14:00 PM
Interesting Noah-Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 7/12/2013 8:34:00 PM
Intriguing.
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Date: 7/12/2013 4:45:00 PM
Noah, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, deep with distance.. I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 7/12/2013 1:31:00 PM
-Hi,Noah. - A good written poem. - Like it a lot. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/12/2013 12:31:00 PM
a fantastic poem , i love to read it
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