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Dream House

I promised I would do it And this promise I have kept. I’ve built your giant dream house And I started with the steps. The bricks that were laid, Are in a beautiful sequence. They’re precious yet so perfect, With a elegant privacy fence. It may have too many windows, And not quite enough doors. The biggest house you’ve seen Is truly and all yours. Now the time’s come for you, To sit right by the man. ‘Cause I built your dream house, And made it out of sand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/12/2008 9:34:00 AM
This is wonderful...they really must be someone special to have this done for them. I feel that same way...
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Date: 11/12/2008 3:10:00 AM
Raul, this is another excellent write! Janice
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Date: 11/12/2008 1:13:00 AM
Raul that person must be very special for you to build a dream house. I'm lucky if I could put a stamp on an envelope. lol I own a small remodeling company. Great write really enjoyed. Please comment on my poetry thankyou your insight means a great deal to me Michael torres
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