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Dream Dram

Once upon a time, I dream In the darkness and in the dim In the immaculate water; I swim In that scene no sorrow but brim The tree and the water in trim I swear! Life here is like film As the lowly chirping birds flimflam The air that greeted me is limbo-lim In this world, I see; I dream Dream it seem; dream it is, sweet dream Light comes and dream goes in mime I wanted to dream, but no more dream Once upon a time, I dream. DREAMS 25TH FEB. 2013

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Skat A

Date: 5/9/2013 9:42:00 PM

Hi Jamiu, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/6/2013 6:19:00 PM

Jamiu, Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; If you like, please consider checking out my newest contest for fun : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and following your poems as of now and the future. If you ever want or need feedback on certain poems, please look me up. I can't wait to read what you highly recommend. You can always stop by and say hi if you like. Keep me posted when you post your next poem…. Thank you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA"