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Dream Come True

Ask and wish bold, ask for clear sight; Dare to seek out, dare to be brave; Reach and unfold, reach your true light; Explore grand bout, explore your crave; Allow your heart, allow your soul; Mind that fond dream, mind knows the way. Choice helps you start, choice makes you whole; Opt for fine theme, opt not to stray. Move your world now, move your thoughts forth; Embrace your dream, embrace your play. Touch and endow, touch and go north; Reap your grand scheme, reap your sure day. Use your time here, use your days well; Explore rich space, explore and tell. Leon Enriquez 08 November 2014 Singapore

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Jasen Ridley

Date: 9/20/2023 8:12:00 AM

Another great one!! Very well written

Leon Enriquez
Date: 9/21/2023 7:33:00 AM

Dear Jason: Thank you. Leon

Adeyemi Joshua

Date: 8/13/2017 4:46:00 PM

Stylishly structured!.....

Leon Enriquez
Date: 8/13/2017 10:06:00 PM

Dear Adeyemi: Thank you. Leon

Niall Fulham

Date: 5/7/2017 10:56:00 AM

Hi Leon , I really like this one , chasing ones dreams , change is so hard to do even when your heart and soul advises you :)))

Leon Enriquez
Date: 5/7/2017 5:31:00 PM

Dear Niall: Thank you. This poem was written about 10 month's after I discovered our PoetrySoup community. It was a difficult write and took me two hours to write and edit. Today, I've been posting for 4years and 3months! And I will do so for as long as my creatives juices flow. All the best then, and "Thank You" for the kind words Niall. Your friend, Leon.

Paul Schneiter

Date: 5/13/2016 10:54:00 PM

I like the positive, affirmative tone of this poem. I also like the soundness of the advice that it gives. I think it's a fine effort, and I commend you for sharing it.

Leon Enriquez
Date: 5/14/2016 3:49:00 AM

Dear Paul: Thank you for your kind words. Leon

Parker Spady

Date: 3/25/2015 1:05:00 PM

very good write keep it up loved reading this

Leon Enriquez
Date: 3/25/2015 8:27:00 PM

Dear Parker: Glad this poem delighted you. Thank you. Leon

Jasper Matthews

Date: 3/23/2015 11:19:00 AM

wow, I wish I came up with such great lines, rhyme and words that was amazing give me more

Leon Enriquez
Date: 3/23/2015 8:46:00 PM

Dear Jasper: Thank you for your kind comments. All the best then, Leon.

Beryl A. Ouma

Date: 3/23/2015 4:09:00 AM

This is a good poem Leon

Leon Enriquez
Date: 3/23/2015 6:39:00 AM

Dear Beryl: Thank you for your kind words. All the best then, Leon.

Xaysouvanh Phengphong

Date: 3/21/2015 11:53:00 AM

Hi Leon, This sonnet is great! I used it to explain to my fellow Poets in Laos who barely started their ESL in poetry! Kob Jai Thanks

Leon Enriquez
Date: 3/21/2015 1:14:00 PM

Dear Xaysouvanh: Thank you. Glad this poem is useful to you in your efforts and ESL journey for your fellow poets in Laos. All the best then, Leon.

Graphite Drug

Date: 3/20/2015 1:19:00 PM

A sonnet form with 8 syllable lines. Well done. It reads like positive philosophy, "live long and prosper." The structure is beautiful and you have an excellent grasp of English. Glad you posted here.

Leon Enriquez
Date: 3/21/2015 12:49:00 AM

Dear Graphite Drug: Glad this poem delighted you. Thank you for your kind words. Leon

Ralph Sergi

Date: 3/20/2015 8:21:00 AM

Hi Leon: Thanks for sharing a dream lifting poem!

Leon Enriquez
Date: 3/21/2015 12:50:00 AM

Dear Ralph: Thank you for your kind words. All the best then, Leon.

Charles Bernabi

Date: 3/20/2015 7:03:00 AM

To dream small is to deny oneself the glory that could be, therefore one needs to dream big to reach for the stars. And your wonderful poem above is so full of rich wisdom and leaves an uplifting mark upon ones heart. Thanks for sharing.

Leon Enriquez
Date: 3/21/2015 12:52:00 AM

Dear Charles: Glad this poem delighted you. Thank you. Leon

Vasudevan Desikachari

Date: 3/20/2015 5:22:00 AM

Dreams indeed remain mysterious and therefore a realm to be explored in practical and para-psychology.Some dreams even take one to his previous birth indicating one's place of birth, parents etc.,and just how a dream picturize these remain absolutely strange.Leon,i agree there is space here for knowing more-"Explore rich space,explore and tell"- indeed is an expressive line and writing this you deserve a full 7.My good wishes to you.

Leon Enriquez
Date: 3/21/2015 12:52:00 AM

Dear Vasudevan: Thank you. Leon

Vasudevan Desikachari

Date: 3/20/2015 5:09:00 AM

Dreams indeed remain realm unexplored even today and there indeed exists space a here for experimental and para-Cpsychologists.It is indeed weird that some dreams foretell what's going to happen and these happen.So the poet rightly says,"explore rich space,and tell" On the whole a good piece of writing indeed and a good poem.

Leon Enriquez
Date: 3/21/2015 12:55:00 AM

Dear Vasudevan: Thank you. Leon

Jeffrey Dela Cruz

Date: 3/20/2015 3:15:00 AM

The poem is full of optimistic, which makes my works the opposite of your life bringing poem. Nice work you have there, sir.

Leon Enriquez
Date: 3/21/2015 12:48:00 AM

Dear Jeffrey: Thank you. Leon

Viv Wigley

Date: 3/19/2015 8:40:00 PM

Life affriming, motivational write. Carpe diem! Congrats on poem of the day. Regards, Viv

Leon Enriquez
Date: 3/20/2015 2:02:00 AM

Dear Viv: Thank you for the kind words. Leon

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/19/2015 4:13:00 PM

An excellent upbeat positive write! Everyone should have this great outlook! I try! Cheers, my friend!

Leon Enriquez
Date: 3/20/2015 2:00:00 AM

Dear Jack: Glad this poem delighted you. Thank you. Leon

Derek Riemer

Date: 3/19/2015 3:53:00 PM

Nice! I like how each line has a repeting element.

Leon Enriquez
Date: 3/20/2015 1:59:00 AM

Dear Derek: Thank you. Leon

Tim Smith

Date: 11/10/2014 4:26:00 PM

Congrats on the feature my friend...use your day wise...cheers

Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/11/2014 1:36:00 AM

Dear Tim: Thank you my friend. Leon

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/10/2014 1:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your write being chosen poem of the day.

Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/11/2014 1:37:00 AM

Dear Maurice: Thank you. Leon

David Meade

Date: 11/10/2014 12:11:00 PM

Your poem is a road map for chasing your dreams . . . so many times we let our dreams fade and die . . . your poem breaths life into this important aspect of life! Nicely done.

Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/11/2014 1:38:00 AM

Dear David: Thank you. Leon

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 11/10/2014 10:05:00 AM

Wonderfully written Leon... Congratulations on being feature as poem of the day... Verlena

Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/11/2014 1:38:00 AM

Dear Verlena: Thank you. Leon

Beryl A. Ouma

Date: 11/10/2014 7:21:00 AM

I love it, thanks

Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/11/2014 1:39:00 AM

Dear Beryl: Thank you. Leon

James Horn

Date: 11/10/2014 5:30:00 AM

I would have given it a ten but they didn't have one. At one time or another we all have been abused by people, the system and various things. Mine was a Boy Scout Life Saving Merit Badge Counselor who tried to reach into my swimming suit when I was 13. Because of him I dropped out of Boy Scouts. That was the last merit badge I needed for Eagle Scout. Will never forget it. Also, Leon was a small town in Kansas near a old Titan II missile site. Jim Horn

Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/11/2014 1:41:00 AM

Dear James: Thank you. Yes, we need to keep our dreams alive. Leon

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/10/2014 2:48:00 AM

- Congrats with today's poem, Leon !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/11/2014 1:41:00 AM

Deat Anne Lise: Thank you. Leon

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/10/2014 1:09:00 AM

Wise words penned, Leon! Congrats to you on having the poem of the day!!

Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/11/2014 1:35:00 AM

Dear Rhonda: Thank you. Leon