Dream and Remember

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~Dream And Remember~ (Free Verse) Always keep God family and friends foremost in life Welcome each person you meet, as a possible friend. Dance away to the music, of our wonderful world, And sing along to brighten the chores of a new day. Take time to dream new dreams, each glorious day. Remember always to say "I Love You" every chance you have, And remember to forgive anyone who has wronged you in any way. Love like there's no tomorrow and be loved the same way, Aim to bring more joy, minus pain, to anyone that you know. You must always be honest and true to yourself, first. Always try and try and never for any reason give up, Remember, that you're just human, and as such,imperfect and flawed. Spend some of your time, on bended knees giving thanks to the Lord, And take pride in anything you've achieved in your life... Remember to smile and take some time out of your busy life, And smell all the roses you encounter on your way out. Hug your family and all your friends in the daily basis too. And take a little time to rest and to dream of only your Love. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 January,10,2015

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Paul Callus

Date: 1/11/2015 2:56:00 PM

Hi Dorian! This is a lovely message which includes some very good advice. If people were to follow these sensible points, then life would be a bundle of fun and joy. #7 Hope you had a nice weekend. // paul

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/17/2015 11:55:00 PM

Thank you so kindly Paul, for stopping by and commenting so nice on my poem. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

John Hardison

Date: 1/11/2015 9:41:00 AM

Nice peice. Expressed it well. Great way to have much joy.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/17/2015 11:54:00 PM

Thank you so kindly John, for stopping by and commenting so nice on my poem. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/10/2015 11:56:00 AM

Nicely put, well written with good poetic skill. The poem has a message of love and delivers it well. This poem flowed well and carried strong emotion. Emile.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/17/2015 11:53:00 PM

Thank you so kindly Emile, for stopping by and commenting so nice on my poem. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "