Dream

DREAM You live slyly, yet so clear, Deep in me, yet so near, You push and press, till I can’t bear, I ignore and play dumb, hoping you will wear, But tag, you follow, that you swear. You pinch and itch till am low, Deep I feel, your roaring flow, You jab I sway, by your blow, I run to hide, from you bright glow, But strong and stubborn you are, I should know, Never at all shall you let me go.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/4/2016 11:05:00 PM

TOMAS, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Tomas Makau
Date: 1/4/2016 11:15:00 PM

thanks Linda.

Skat A

Date: 1/3/2016 10:38:00 PM

HOPE TO SEE A NEW ONE FROM YOU SOON

Skat A

Date: 1/3/2016 5:03:00 AM

Tomas,,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"