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I inhale the crisp air, It smells of the rich earth; The scents of the forest, Sweet, and piercing my senses. There is a happiness and joy, A beauty and tranquility; Trees give way to fields of green, And wildflowers grow in every hue. There is a twitter of a bird, A squirrel foraging in the grass; It all blends seamlessly within my dream, In happy sweet harmony. I hear the sound of rushing water, A waterfall cascading over a jagged cliff; Where below silver fish swim, And I cup the water to my lips. Oh, what a delightfully happy dream. __________________ August 30, 2015 Verse For the contest, Get Happy 101, sponsor, Casarah Nance Fourth Place

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Date: 9/15/2015 3:50:00 PM
A lovely dream, Broken, and you've painted it so beautifully with your words. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/14/2015 9:19:00 PM
I like your dream, Constance! Sounds like one I'd like to have. Congrats on your win! Love, KIm
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Date: 9/14/2015 1:19:00 PM
awesome win
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Date: 9/14/2015 4:12:00 AM
Superb take with this very happy write n a great win Broken! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/13/2015 8:22:00 AM
Coming back to say congrats, congrats :)
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Date: 9/13/2015 4:30:00 AM
what a lovely dream congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/13/2015 12:51:00 AM
Congratulations Broken Wings. Beautiful write. What a dream.
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Date: 9/12/2015 11:23:00 PM
BW, congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/12/2015 8:35:00 PM
So calming and happy I love it! Grats on your win!
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Date: 9/1/2015 3:46:00 PM
Wow!!!! You painted this with vivid imagery... A wonderful and sweet dream...excellence.........A.M.
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Date: 9/1/2015 3:21:00 PM
Beautiful dream BW.
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Date: 9/1/2015 9:33:00 AM
Wonderful work with great thought given to the subject mater as it is gently unfolded for the readers delight giving it a dream like quality. Emile.
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Date: 8/31/2015 7:23:00 PM
the imagery in this dream....is some of the greatest ever seen....it pierces the heart touching the Soul....with too much warmth to ever turn cold....;)
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Date: 8/31/2015 4:42:00 PM
Soup Mail...
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Date: 8/31/2015 4:17:00 PM
Gorgeous poem Broken Wings absolutely Gorgeous!!! Love sister Susan!
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Date: 8/31/2015 2:19:00 PM
your sense of joy shines through this resplendent write, constance... ever lovely.. huggs.. soupie for you!
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Date: 8/31/2015 12:02:00 PM
You captured all the senses in this delightful poem..a truly happy dream
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Date: 8/31/2015 12:59:00 AM
Nature speaks to us, BM, in a language that soothes and calms. It times it is tempestuous as well, but....there is much beauty in nature. Lovely dream of a poem, dear. Hugs
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Date: 8/30/2015 11:15:00 PM
Yeah, Awesome dream, congrats!!!
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Date: 8/30/2015 9:52:00 PM
That was Beautifully written!!! I hope you will stop pass some times. I think you might enjoy "Moon Light". I hope to see you there. Have a good night!!!
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