Dream

embraced by smiles but, swollowed by tears i tried to stay strong but, the weight of the world has finally deafeted me i have transformed my dreams into realistic actions which is not my defenition of sucess by far but it is the way the world has defined it for u and for me it has told us not to dream, but to focus but why dont they just tell us to focus on our dreams?

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/12/2012 4:26:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Joni Havard
Date: 10/14/2012 5:39:00 PM

thanks bunches sara(:

Joni Havard

Date: 10/12/2012 9:43:00 AM

@carol brown hi im new to poetry soup and what does the term HM mean?

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/9/2012 11:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your H M in my "Life These Days" (Bio Form)contest Joni. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/30/2012 9:21:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Joni. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

Lynn Dolly

Date: 9/28/2012 4:45:00 AM

I like this! What you are describing is a notion that many never get. Takes guts to make dreams come true. It's not the ONLY definition of success, but it's certainly one of them! There are a few spelling errors, but nothing crazy:) Keep it coming!