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Dreadlocks

Friday, October 23, 2009 Most unusual clouds this morning They look like dreadlocks turned Gray with streaks of red and pink Certainly a sky blue sky where There are no clouds I see this as beauty but no one Told me it is beautiful so who is Observing this scene through my Eyes saying this is beauty There is an order to everything Flowers have certain number Of petals with leaves arranged The human eye sees the order The eye says this is beauty Who made these so that they see The ball of sun is showing Radiating it's glow on the scene Seen only through the trees That are silhouetted but not Totally black just dark Outlines with sun peeking Roosters greet the day With their cock-a-doodle-do How are you? Responsiblility calls Thank you for this time To commune with God

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Date: 10/28/2009 11:10:00 AM
Sara, I see dreadlocks every day, my partner wears them lol, it is a lovely poem, god gave us the eyes to see, so we will carry on creating beauty with thought, as he gave us his image, he gave us his power of thought love Simone
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Date: 10/27/2009 2:36:00 AM
Excellent write I loved the first stanza. Very descriptive. Keep writing
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Date: 10/26/2009 11:57:00 AM
Wow! Beautiful visual, lovely sentiments. Very touching, smile. Read it twice. Truly enjoyed. Keep writing! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/26/2009 7:29:00 AM
Hi Sara! I've seen "Dreadlock" skies like you have described. I have even photographed a few. They are GLORIOUS!!! Thanks for your comments. Love you. Dane
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Date: 10/26/2009 7:12:00 AM
Beautiful observations of the wonders of God's creation, shows the love connection you have with God, the source of all creation, in his one Spirit. As we maintain the purity of love's connection, ther will be many gifts of the Spirit manifests through us. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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