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Dread

Sleep denied, binding sheets restrained hot, apprehensive form; beneath the bed, dragons' tails rapped red staccato on the rails, those blaze colored beasts restlessly groaned embered tones, cauterizing thoughts on Fear's volcanic brand. Heavy quiet, sinister, stealthily slinking in the dark, gathered like oppressive fog about the midnight strike. The knob chattered, teeth on edge, a hammer blow of door on wall before the fall of footsteps stabbing down the hall. Repulsive sound . . . belt undone, colliding with the floor, the hated, clutching heaviness of him who roughly spoiled. Copyright, August 9, 2014

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Date: 2/6/2016 4:13:00 PM
Faye, Congrats on "Your Dark Side of Love WIN!!!" XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/5/2016 1:38:00 PM
well done and rightfully dark, faye.. sweet congrats!..huggs
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Date: 2/4/2016 9:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Your dark imagery is very expressive.
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Date: 2/4/2016 7:35:00 AM
very atmospheric Faye superb pen congrats on 2nd place hugs
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Date: 2/4/2016 6:36:00 AM
You tackled this subject so well Faye congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/4/2016 6:16:00 AM
How awful to have to live with such repugnant fear, but a great way of telling the tale. Congratulations on your placement, Faye. I'm glad you resurrected this one...well done.
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Date: 6/15/2015 7:46:00 PM
awesome
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Date: 6/14/2015 7:39:00 PM
Amazing imagery in this dark tale of suspense... Great writing, Faye! Congrats on the win!
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Date: 9/7/2014 12:34:00 PM
wow, Faye, I am seeing it again with new eyes from what you told me. you are an amazing talent and your life experiences have given you plenty of ammunition with which to fire away with amazing poetry!
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Date: 8/16/2014 5:37:00 PM
CHILLS, GOOSEBUMPS! What else can I say my friend? YOU, dear lady are on a SERIOUS roll...
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Date: 8/16/2014 10:56:00 AM
Oh wow, you have tackled such a difficult topic with power here, Faye... you've written this quite effectively, that it stays with you and feels that weight after... super congrats on your top win! Also, thank you so much for your inspiring words and the fave, I am honored with that.
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Date: 8/16/2014 1:24:00 AM
Congrats on big win on an awesome write Faye!
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Date: 8/15/2014 11:02:00 PM
YES< I just knew it would win!!! BIG congrats.
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Date: 8/15/2014 10:50:00 PM
Man the last verse was a verbal rape! you go gal! Congrad's LIGHT & love
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Date: 8/15/2014 8:48:00 PM
Wow, Faye! yea, we both tackled abuse, but i think for this one i will be unfaithful to myself. i love yours, much more than mine, haha!! Congratulations and very well done!!
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Date: 8/15/2014 8:41:00 PM
Congratulations.... Linda
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Date: 8/15/2014 6:21:00 PM
Faye, darkly written and fear perceiving... Congratulations on your high marks in the contest... Verlena
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Date: 8/15/2014 2:44:00 PM
This really is chilling and well written Faye...you captured the feeling of impending gloom masterfully...congrats
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Date: 8/15/2014 5:52:00 AM
You have penned a very sad picture in the poem, congrats on the win, Faye
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Date: 8/15/2014 5:28:00 AM
faye, I knew this would be a top winner the first time I read it; you've delivered a very chilling write indeed...I love "rapped red staccato" and I like the internal rhyme of wall/fall/hall, echoing the echo of footsteps in a hall...it's a privilege to read poetry such as this - congrats on your top win in my contest! :)
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Date: 8/10/2014 5:28:00 PM
OH MY, another sad picture brilliantly portrayed. You really created the atmosphere of doom and dread here. Is it for the Dark contest?
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Faye Gibson
Date: 8/10/2014 5:43:00 PM
Yes, it is. Thanks, Andrea.

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