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Draining Experience - Flying the Coop Contest

Been eating medusa dates Lovely fat juicy ones I ate and ate them Oh my they were so good Why does my stomach feel ***** I thought the next day Oh my! to the bathroom I ran and sat , and sat and sat Dare not leave, was in a quandary The estate agent was calling in an hour My mam needed a price for probate. The smell lingered , Febreze Air, or the external fan Couldn't remove it. The doorbell went, I went out the back door Left my mam to apologise, to this day I do not eat fresh dates. Beware of things fat and squiggy nice to eat Can lead you into a foul smelly time. Penned 29 April 2015

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Skat A

Date: 6/2/2015 12:14:00 AM

Seren, congratulations on your awesome win. **SKAT**

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/1/2015 3:07:00 PM

I am not surprised that this funny poem was a winner !!! What a story !!!! :) Congrats for the laugh !!

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/1/2015 3:29:00 PM

Was true Carrie, what an earth moving experience not to be repeated,, laughable nowadays, .....Seren

Eve Roper

Date: 6/1/2015 1:28:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win :~)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/1/2015 11:19:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats - such a lovely avatar too Seren:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jiril Clemons

Date: 5/3/2015 7:52:00 PM

The carefree brilliance of this piece, Seren, is so obvious. Great poem. A enjoyable fun spirit is expressed through this poetic piece, great story as well..understandable as well. Check out some my poems, might find some you like. Peace.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/1/2015 4:42:00 AM

Congrats on poem of the day Seren!! hugs jan xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/1/2015 10:28:00 PM

Thanks Jan, was a bit of a surprise, no that's not right, was a ruddy big surprise....Seren

Brynn Rose

Date: 4/30/2015 11:38:00 PM

This is so funny! I love it :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/1/2015 10:29:00 PM

Funny now, wasnt so at the time....lol.... Seren

Marilyn Williams

Date: 4/30/2015 8:34:00 PM

This is cute. Made me laugh. Thanks for the warning. Congrats for poem of the day.

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/1/2015 10:29:00 PM

Thanks Marilyn....Seren

Eve Roper

Date: 4/30/2015 7:16:00 PM

Oh, wonderful, a 7experiences like these one tend to one to forget. Good luck in the contest, and congratulations on Poem of the Day very well deserved

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/1/2015 10:30:00 PM

Was an experience alright haha thanks for commenting...Seren