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dragonfly on my fingertips faith for the giant NOTE: I normally don't post pictures with my poetry - though I guess I never actually had the option before - but in any case, this actually happened to me, when visiting my uncle in Florida. This big blue dragonfly was perched on my fingers for nearly 10 minutes, even as I was fumbling for my phone in my pocket to take a picture! I don't know what compelled the little guy to stay there for so long, and not fly away in terror ... but it was a special moment for me.

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Date: 5/9/2020 12:38:00 AM
I love this one.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/9/2020 3:51:00 PM
Not sure if the picture is visible on your screen or not... but this really happened to me ... I thought it was kind of amazing.
Date: 5/25/2016 12:51:00 AM
Brave blue dragonfly/ modeling for the human/ a mysterious bond
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/28/2016 10:03:00 PM
Appreciate your creative haiku response Miss 'Twinkle ... it is rather a mysterious bond!
Date: 3/22/2016 5:41:00 PM
You're the dragonfly whisperer! :) A sweet moment in time. It's cute ^_^ Always, Laura
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/24/2016 2:23:00 AM
It was a really special moment for me and Mr. Dragonfly ... I halfway want to say it was a spiritual connection ... but that might be getting a bit dramatic! In any case, it's there, it happened ... and it's forever in my memory ^_^
Date: 2/25/2016 11:27:00 PM
I can see it Tim: He wanted to pose for you. Maybe he had heard about the giant that leaves sugar for the ants. Lol SuZ
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/27/2016 6:45:00 PM
LOL! Almost forgot about that piece ... word sure gets around quick in the insect world.
Date: 2/25/2016 11:04:00 PM
......And both love and faith lodging in the fingers that soon almost immortalized both the holder and the guest in this beautiful haiku.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/27/2016 6:44:00 PM
Almost immortalized is correct, my friend! A companionship though short-lived, but will exist in memory ... photography ... and poetry! Glad you enjoyed, Probir.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/27/2016 6:31:00 PM
Almost immortalized is correct, my friend! A companionship though short-lived, but will exist in memory ... photography ... and poetry! Glad you enjoyed, Probir.
Date: 2/24/2016 12:13:00 PM
Back again, Timothy...this time the picture shows clearly...beautiful!:)
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/24/2016 11:18:00 PM
Thank you Paul. It was fun :)
Date: 2/24/2016 11:19:00 AM
Great picture Timothy! Coolio!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/24/2016 11:17:00 PM
Thanks Rick! It seems they had weirder insects in Florida than in Idaho!
Date: 2/24/2016 9:27:00 AM
Hi Timothy...for some reason the picture won't show...will try again later, although this haiku and the footnote are ample to give me a clear idea. That dragonfly must have had full faith in you! Gentle giants are easy to recognize:) ~ Regards // paul
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/24/2016 11:16:00 PM
Hey Paul. I guess the interpretation can go either way ... whatever the reader brings to the table. Never thought of myself as a gentle giant before (I'm the shorty in the family ... lol!)
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Paul Callus
Date: 2/24/2016 9:28:00 AM
...of course, faith could also be the other way round!
Date: 2/24/2016 8:17:00 AM
very nice ku Timothy. I like gow it is the giant that has to have faith and not the little dragonfly.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/24/2016 10:45:00 PM
It can go either way it seems. Glad you enjoyed my simple poem :)
Date: 2/24/2016 5:12:00 AM
Great power in this Haiku Timothy, well done
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/24/2016 10:40:00 PM
Thanks Brian! :)
Date: 2/24/2016 1:58:00 AM
I enjoyed the poem and the added commentary. You being hear has added a needed spark to the soup Timothy.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/24/2016 10:18:00 PM
Thanks Richard! Hopefully, with everyone's added sparks, we can get a bonfire going!
Date: 2/24/2016 1:49:00 AM
Excellent haiku! I had a dragonfly perch on rim of my coffee cup I was holding, not my finger but still close enough. It is an awesome experience.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/24/2016 10:16:00 PM
Indeed it is :) Thank you Susan!
Date: 2/23/2016 11:22:00 PM
i really enjoyed reading this piece my dear ! I would love to read more of your poems...have a blessed day !
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/24/2016 10:14:00 PM
Thanks Red! Never seen you before, but thanks for stopping by :)

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