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Dragon Boat

the sky upends as we cut the lake quick white strokes in the dark current the flow of bodies a single bright ripple somewhere in the space between the blade tip and water, it occurs: the mind releases the rain falls silver salt scales bloom across our arms and backs rising, falling like the breath of a dragon coursing out each jagged exhalation all returns to water the dull roar in the distant horizon calls us home

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/4/2012 5:17:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Julia. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/16/2011 3:03:00 PM
"This aint Kansas, Toto. And. Oh, Auntie Em." Probably not what you had in mind, but your piece - which I find very interesting - brought the quotes to mind. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 11/16/2011 6:47:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week Julia. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/16/2011 2:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Julia
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Date: 7/14/2011 8:55:00 PM
Excellent, one I can appreciate as my son use to row. Thank you great poem. Lee
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Date: 7/14/2011 6:56:00 PM
Wow Julia this really a fantastic write! You got everything working here...a creative artwork full of imagery, mood, and poetic penmanship with an amazing title that surrounds the poem! Very beautiful!
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