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Dragged To Hell

I am exhausted All these faces haunt my soul No sleep comes to me When I killed them they all cried Now they watch me with those grins I know I'll be dragged to hell For Freddie's Tanka Contest Let me see if you can guess I wrote this one.

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Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 4/20/2013 6:25:00 PM

Sorry I am late in offering my congratulations. You also won second place as a wool-puller, (see the blog). Good job on both your wins. This new style is quite different.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/20/2013 6:44:00 PM

Thanks Isaiah I will check out the blog.

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/20/2013 10:57:00 AM

Lovely write Richcrown (my word)... Congrats on your beautiful win~A.O

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/20/2013 6:45:00 PM

I like your word. Thanks A.O

Donna Jones

Date: 4/20/2013 8:10:00 AM

Where did this come from Richard?...deep!!!!!!! Amazing!!!!!!! Congratulations......Donna

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/20/2013 8:22:00 AM

Not really sure Lol, maybe to many episodes of criminal minds or perhaps reading Stephen King Novels.

Rachel Kovacs

Date: 4/20/2013 6:59:00 AM

Creepy! As a crime fiction author, I love it. I like that you took a different point of view and got inside a killer's head. It reminds me of Poe.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/20/2013 8:07:00 AM

Thanks Rachel

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/19/2013 6:25:00 PM

Congrad's on Your Win. Light & Love

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/19/2013 6:41:00 PM

Thanks Debbie.

Richard D Seal

Date: 4/19/2013 5:24:00 PM

Rather disturbing Riiiccchhhaarrddd lol but also rather good and better they are haunting him, well done and congratulations. Take care, Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/19/2013 5:26:00 PM

Thanks Richard

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/19/2013 1:49:00 PM

Wow..........you really changed your style.....I would not have guessed this to be yours!! You wowed us all !!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/19/2013 2:01:00 PM

Thanks Carrie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/19/2013 10:17:00 AM

congratulations.... Linda

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/15/2013 2:08:00 AM

Yikes! This was something I didn't expect from you... don't stay up too late watching horror films would be my advice! Grudge kept me awake at nights for at least two weeks. This could also be about a post-war veteran, coming back with all the awful memories of battle... you put me in the moment.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/15/2013 6:51:00 AM

Thanks Timothy

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 4/10/2013 12:38:00 PM

I would not have guessed you wrote this Rick....well done! Soupmail

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/10/2013 7:51:00 PM

Thanks Cecilia

James Fraser

Date: 4/5/2013 5:21:00 PM

Our deep, it's stark, our abyss, dark. It's our awakening that answers. Love it Richard, I so love Dark writes. Have a koolio weekend, James <> also says a massive thank you, especially for Colleen xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/9/2013 6:45:00 AM

Thanks

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/31/2013 4:40:00 PM

Reading the comments, I see why you did one like this. I think you will fool him, Richard. Way to go!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/1/2013 7:17:00 AM

Thanks

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/31/2013 1:55:00 PM

This is a sure masquarade if you are going for a poem that does not reflect your usual style...great job!! (I see that it is for the contest to go into a different type of poem than the usual!) This will do it!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/1/2013 7:18:00 AM

Thanks Carrie

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/31/2013 1:22:00 PM

WOW....me no like, Richard. Me no like!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/31/2013 1:39:00 PM

As long as you know....this isn't who you are...SURE...all that what lurks within stuff was pretty intense, but...it is good to explore! I just wanted to tease.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/31/2013 1:35:00 PM

Sopposed to do a poem unrecognizable from my normal persona so I guess mission accomplished.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/31/2013 1:23:00 PM

Was that too candid. I'm sorry. I don't picture you as a killer....rather a healer.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/31/2013 1:10:00 PM

Don't worry I have not moved to the dark side, this is for Isaiah's contest. I had to write in a new form and different than my regular way of expressing myself.