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Drag Me Down Slowly

Take small offenses deep to heart let all resentments boil and fester Tend with care the growing hate until you'll bear the load no longer Seize careless phrases or random words read looks on faces as you'd a book Imagine the worst of every person until you'll burst with silent rage Now drag me down into your pit and make me drown inside of it But do it slow, so I will feel that what you know is oh, so real

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/7/2015 3:56:00 AM
This is a powerful pen David! Wow! Enjoyed the read, dear friend.A 7! Wishing you a lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:) D.
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David Brown
Date: 4/7/2015 2:46:00 PM
Thank you Dorian, always appreciate you taking the time to visit and comment on my work

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