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Doyou Hear What I Hear

Do you hear what I hear The poem read and enjoyed Words of love, words put in to motion of our emotions Do you see what I see The world turning outside A fresh brand new day And season of colors passing by Do.you feel what I feel The glow of sun warming And the cold bring out the gold in me Do you smell what I smell The cool crisp of clean air The blooms and water that flows The love that has been bestowed 12/ 2/ 2016

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Date: 12/2/2016 1:10:00 PM
Nice write Eve. Not everyone use the senses in the same way, hence I enjoyed your experience shared from what you heard, saw, felt and smelled while out in nature. Please feel free to visit my sight anytime. Hugs, Rainbow.
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/5/2016 3:18:00 PM
Thank you so very much for the kind words of inspiration: ) Hugs Eve Have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year
Date: 12/2/2016 12:44:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem Eve.
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/5/2016 3:19:00 PM
Thank you so very much for the kind words of inspiration: ) Hugs Eve Have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year
Date: 12/2/2016 12:40:00 PM
Hi Eve, This is beautiful. I enjoyed the lovely scene this fine morning .Well done.Thanks for stopping by my page earlier :-) Alexis
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/5/2016 3:19:00 PM
Always nice to see you when you drop in, Alexis. Thank you so very much for the kind words of inspiration: ) Hugs Eve Have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year
Date: 12/2/2016 11:55:00 AM
What channel are you watching, Mrs Eve? I love the poem but the love is in short supply, I think:)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/2/2016 3:08:00 PM
I'm glad it gave you inspiration. Thank you for answering the question in my poem:) Mrs Eve, sometimes I struggle for days just to find the exact word I'm looking for. For me, it is of utmost importance that whoever reads my scribbles understands exactly what I'm trying to convey.
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/2/2016 12:06:00 PM
the outside channel, Daniel, I'm reading poems and trying to keep warm because the days are changing... Your poem gave me the idea to write this Hugs eve
Date: 12/2/2016 9:48:00 AM
This is beautiful Eve and it felt good to read but to answer your questions, I am at work, it is cloudy and cold outside, I can smell burnt coffee and hear my employees complaining about anything and everything, but after reading your wonderful poem, I am smiling too. :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/2/2016 12:08:00 PM
Chris, in a way I'm glad I'm retired, but still not enough time to do so many things . I just need a little more time in the day hugs Eve
Date: 12/2/2016 9:36:00 AM
Beautiful, Eve! Very nicely expressed!
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/2/2016 12:07:00 PM
Thank you, Rick, especially poems like yours to inspire and enjoy Hugs Eve

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