Dowsed

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As a red fireball sun rises Setting pine silhouettes ablaze A damp coolness really disguises The warmth soon to flow from gold rays Doves' cooing entertains quiet Roosters excitedly invite A welcome to day's varied diet Another gift from God's good insight All of nature seems excited Another day of love to the fill While mankind lingers benighted His dreams dowsed mostly unfulfilled

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Tom Quigley

Date: 6/12/2016 6:02:00 PM

Beautiful write!

Joe Dimino

Date: 6/12/2016 6:16:00 AM

Long time yet before man (woman too) truly understand and appreciate God's glorious opportunity for us. Great writing!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/12/2016 7:35:00 AM

Error in line two which I don't see how to correct..Should say but we all also miss out on trying to live good clean lives that would honor Him..SK

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/12/2016 7:33:00 AM

Yes, I was referring to mankind which includes women as well..We all miss out on His glory but we are also miss out on trying to live good clean lives that would honor Him..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara