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Downward Spiral

The fog murks its way in front of me daylight fades into a lurid glow. I drift loose as stones lost in my mind hanging on to sanity by a fragile thread. There’s a hunger within me that won’t abate to fix my personal planet to a fiery star, ride its path around the universe along with other constellations lighting luminous lamps burning the darkness. Through an astrological lens, I pierce the sliver of a half-moon gleaming beside my star prods me to relinquish a pervasive sense of hopelessness creeping into deep pools of sadness, losing myself totally and I am left with nothing but a mere whisper of dust. I latch on instead to the tail of a comet hoping to land myself into a glorious sunset but it speeds us through space plunging me on a downward spiral toward a stygian oblivion. @jjote 022121

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Date: 2/28/2021 3:11:00 AM
there often lies a new star behind the darkness of depression ...
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Josefina Costales
Date: 3/7/2021 2:20:00 PM
Thanks Kai for the read
Date: 2/22/2021 11:23:00 AM
Depression can do that to us dear poet. very well written, may your heart soar towards the stars of heaven instead, thank you for your kind visit.
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Josefina Costales
Date: 2/25/2021 1:16:00 PM
Thanks Rose, glad you appreciate this.

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