Downtown

Oh’ poor Mr. Brown His heaven, is the bar downtown At home he wished it be But much scolding, endures he. Stacey Brown 2-5-14

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Date: 1/18/2017 11:10:00 AM

Hehehehe.... I loved this piece, Stacey!! ;-) If you get time, read my piece "The Night". It's bar-related, lol.

Stacey Brown
Date: 1/21/2017 11:39:00 AM

Thanks my friend I will check out you writings

Date: 1/18/2017 9:18:00 AM

No domestic bliss, put in such a clever way. Congrats on the selection. daver

Stacey Brown
Date: 1/21/2017 11:39:00 AM

Thanks

Date: 1/18/2017 8:53:00 AM

This is a great simplicity .. love it ! Good job

Stacey Brown
Date: 1/21/2017 11:40:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words my friend

Date: 2/6/2014 11:49:00 AM

- Another good one - you are good with clerihew, Stacey !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Stacey Brown
Date: 2/6/2014 12:19:00 PM

thanks again poetry friend!!

Date: 2/5/2014 4:00:00 PM

This is perfect.....Tim

Stacey Brown
Date: 2/5/2014 4:30:00 PM

thanks Tim! blessings, Stacey