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Below is the poem entitled Downpour which was written by poet Harpreet Kaur. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Love your dark grey face
With silver flash of anger
Downpour of tantrums.

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  1. Date: 7/6/2014 5:05:00 AM
    - Some believe that haiku poems is so easy to write - but it's not true - Well done, Harpreet - This was touching - and powerful! - // Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 7/15/2014 12:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello Anne. Thank you so much for your encouraging feedback. And yes, apologies for the delayed reply. I read your compositions, including those haikus you mentioned. Good job. I will read more from you soon and leave my comments. Keep writing and growing!