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Downpour

Love your dark grey face With silver flash of anger Downpour of tantrums.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/7/2015 8:18:00 AM
Wonderful imagery.
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Date: 7/6/2014 5:05:00 AM
- Some believe that haiku poems is so easy to write - but it's not true - Well done, Harpreet - This was touching - and powerful! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Harpreet Kaur
Date: 7/15/2014 12:22:00 AM
Hello Anne. Thank you so much for your encouraging feedback. And yes, apologies for the delayed reply. I read your compositions, including those haikus you mentioned. Good job. I will read more from you soon and leave my comments. Keep writing and growing!

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