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Black umbrella pupils Unfurling as my lips Hold my tongue hostage Your arms batter my heart's door Howling winds ripping the roof Off all our broken promises But then your lashes shuttered stuck As my fingers danced in your rain Your lips downgraded A hurricane ------ Knew it was a matter of time before I wrote a hurricane poem. Hurrah for being a Floridian. Downgrading storms= storm weakens/ends

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Date: 6/17/2014 1:47:00 PM
Yes! Yes! That's exactly what I'm talkin about Riverbank, reinvent the language and love!!! Yes! Taking ownership of the storm. A most beautiful write. "Your arms batter my heart's door..." wow woman. J.A.B.
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