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Downfall

descending from our souls and fear outward landing, never found when we find it, disappear never do we make a sound falling from our mental summit always do we see our pains leering at us as we plummet losing self a temporal stain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/9/2010 6:16:00 AM
very very true and good you even end rhymed wow! Light & Love ..perhapsyou'd read my Undignified Death?
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Date: 6/9/2010 4:40:00 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned this moring...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/9/2010 4:36:00 AM
Nicely rhymed, well constructed, but I have to admit the first three lines are a complete mystery to me, the second half is very good.
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