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Down With the Sunset

I'm sure time slowed Because to me it stopped The fiery colored sky Was gentle to the rising night Even gentler to me It had no reason to be But like lovers it treated me My eyes followed the flow Of the waves as they come and go God bless where the water kissed my toes My sins must have been forgiven then Because of the peace I felt I had wanted to jump in Not to drown, I could swim But I wanted to lose my breath To catch it again A rebirth at sunset

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Date: 4/28/2020 6:13:00 AM
That was a beautiful poem!! I to find my peace when I'm near water. Congrats on your placement :)
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Shagesa Mattheeuw
Date: 6/3/2020 9:46:00 AM
Thank you so much for liking my poem. And I'm happy we can relate to one another. Love xoxo :)
Date: 4/27/2020 5:11:00 PM
Your profound connection with nature is felt in this amazing poem Shagesa! Congratulations on your podium win! Blessings xxoo
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Shagesa Mattheeuw
Date: 6/3/2020 9:32:00 AM
Thank you. I really appreciate your words. It means a lot to me when my poem can touch the reader. To me that's the greatest praise. Blessings xoxoxo

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