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Down This Lonely Street

I slowly walk on a cold road all alone Sky is a misty white with the full moon out Its freezing, my fingers are cold to the bone The shadows from the trees are scattered about I can see my breath, a mist like air outside It glows in the light of the moon that’s beside Onward I walk, going down this lonely street Not knowing what is out there, or who I’ll meet
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/3/2013 10:55:00 PM
Russell; This brings back memories. I remember how many times before - I did that. Reading this kind of gives me the chills. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 4/2/2013 3:13:00 AM
Another excellent write my dear friend Russell. Sad feeling but so beautiful. If this is for a contest, it's a winner for me. Kudos my dear friend for a great job and write! Thank you again for another wonderful comment in my latest write. Have a great day! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 4/1/2013 10:22:00 PM
This stirs the heart, Russell. A very well written Rispetto. Perfect imagery and flow. Lonliness affects so many people; and some will not admit it, it is a reality of life. Always, Annalise
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Date: 4/1/2013 10:12:00 PM
Love the visuals...you took me on the walk. Enjoyed !!
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Date: 4/1/2013 5:11:00 PM
Nothing like a good walk to get both the blood and mind going..and one never knows who he might meet!...enjoyed Russell,...Donna
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Date: 4/1/2013 2:58:00 PM
Russell a very visual write..I like it...David
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Date: 4/1/2013 10:29:00 AM
love this atmospheric write, Russell
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Date: 4/1/2013 6:59:00 AM
That is the very feelings of lonely..Great expressive and emotive work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were encouraging..Soup mail..Sara
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